Advertisements are influencing us in a negative way, to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, for many businesses, advertisement has become their number one tool to uplift their sale.
However
, ads can be seen as influencing the public in a negative way. I would argue that Linking Words
this
is not necessarily the case Linking Words
always
which be discussed in detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Rephrase
apply
To begin
with, there is no dought that some individuals take promotions in a bad way. Linking Words
Firstly
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according to
them, what they have bought because of advertisement, is not commensurate to the payment they have Linking Words
done
. Verb problem
made
For instance
, they Linking Words
have
bought a Zara jacket at a price of 15k which is not made of original leather and got damaged within six months. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
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due to
extensive commercials, the common mob tend to buy more than they actually need.
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On the other hand
, promotions do have a greater number of positives which influence the crowd in the right way. A student who has just passed his graduation may get aided by a publication to get his first job. Linking Words
For example
, a lot of youngsters don't have proper knowledge about how to find work after their education, but they Linking Words
saw
an article about a job position available and they can apply for the same. Wrong verb form
see
Moreover
, today because of social media, more and more people are becoming aware of the unique products and how to get them which were not available readily in their local market.
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To conclude
, bearing in mind the above information and deliberating all facts, it can be deduced that Linking Words
although
there are ill effects of publicity, the advantages of promotions can not be overlooked. Linking Words
In other words
, advertisements are only a business strategy but it solely depends on us how to react to them.Linking Words
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