With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the era of health
care
advancements,families
have to care
for maximum elderly people
. In this
essay, I will highlight how societies will be able to manage the increase in the proportion of old age people
today and solutions for resolving these issues. Personally, I feel communities won't be able to cope with the increase
number of elderly Replace the word
increasing
people
.
To begin
with, there are several factors that show families
are unable to take care
of maximum elderly peoples
. Fix the agreement mistake
people
First
and foremost, people
are busy with their work-life thus
, they are not able to manage them properly. Moreover
, families
with small kids find it difficult to manage old age peoples
as these peoples require more attention and Fix the agreement mistake
people
care
at home. For example
, one of my relatives who is working for a U.S insurance company is unable to take proper care
of his old age parents
because of the working schedule between the two countries.
However
, there is a saying "where there is a will there is a way".In addition
, these problems can be resolved by hiring one health care
staff for their older parents
who can take proper care
of them in their absence. Significantly, families
also
should take time for elderly people
and respect them as they have been cared
Change to the active voice
cared
during
their childhood as children at home get influenced by their Change preposition
for during
parents
.Therefore
, they should eliminate the intergenerational communication gap. Such
as, In a recent survey of Times Of India juveniles treats their parents
as their parents
manage their old parents
as they get influenced by their parents
.
In conclusion, It is hard to manage elderly people
as they need more attention and time but it is our responsibility to take proper care
of them as upbringings matters a lot in individuals nature. I believe,
societies won't be able to manage elderly Remove the comma
apply
people
properly because of their professional work culture.Submitted by vfxabhii on
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