Young people are often influenced by their peers. This is called peer group pressure. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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from fellows has risen in popularity in youngsters' life.

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with the advantages, a crucial benefit of peer group

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is that it guides adolescents in becoming the best version of themselves.

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is because older friends are often considered as role models whose duty it is to show a greater or a higher level of maturity and responsibilities to those who are still learning how to behave responsibly.

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from wiser individuals, teenagers often tend to broaden their

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when being controlled by others.

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, being influenced by a group of people at school enables teenagers to achieve their learning goals successfully. As they tend to follow guidance from other classmates,

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might help learners to reach higher grades,

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not falling behind their studies.

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, peer

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does present some issues.

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time has been one of the most significant

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for a large number of pupils. Considering that, emotional abuse is a situation that often leads to isolation rather than a state of

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for young adults. Another significant

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of being influenced by peers

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that it decreases a sense of autonomy.

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an environment is likely to prevent weak-minded people from standing up for themselves,

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personal opinions towards subjects or topics are sometimes omitted. To conclude, the benefits of being guided and enhancing success in younger generations are outweighed by the negatives of psychological

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and freedom of conscience.