many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education others claims that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the word of work . to what extent do you agree or disagree

In many societies these days, people are concerned about full-time jobs completing

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studies at university while, others think that starting hard-working after high school leads someone employees a good job. There are several reasons why I think both the statements are true to some extent because there is some profession that requires deep knowledge as well as some others that needs work experience. The

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and perhaps the most significant reason is time management, as long as, if humanity can works and studies at the same time, it would be better, but another way guy only learns at university that takes a lot of knowledge. An example to illustrate

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point about my acquaintance, he was often worked for lack of money for housing and stopped working hard. To be more precise, it is dependent on the situation, as I mentioned before people should be more spend time studying because the most important thing is to get a diploma. It is particularly significant , it would be worst going to work without a diploma. While

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people developing now , others think about how I give some cash for my life.

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, there are a lot of works where need experience for a full-time job,

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as designers.

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work does not have everyone , a person needs good characteristics. The logical conclusion would be humanity should not be hard-working after school, but if he has a problem with equipment, he or she would have a refinement that ensures yourself.