There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should • describe the event • explain why you think he/she would be interested in it • suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her

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Dear Jassie, I hope that you and your family are well. I heard that your brother will be graduating soon and the graduation ceremony will be in April. Will your family be flying over to Australia to attend the ceremony and celebrate with him? I want to let you know that there will be a talk held in my town, where the well-known local authors will deliver their speech. It will be in the
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the organizing committee of that event. It will likely be held in the National University compound and probably an outdoor venue. Details are yet to be confirmed. What's more interesting is that Aung San Suu Kyi will be giving a speech too! After you've read a book written by her, you have been telling me that you want to listen to her speech and see her in person, if there is a chance. Well, the opportunity that you've been waiting for has come! If we were lucky, we might get to greet her as well. If you'd like to attend, I will buy tickets for us when they are available. Let me know how and when you'll
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. The event is likely in the morning. So, on the event day itself, I'll pick you up for a quick breakfast before heading to the talk. Looking forward to receiving your reply. Best regards, Katherine Stone
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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