In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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explore the architecture history of their living place in a few countries. There could be several reasons why
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to find the story. In recent years, ‘YouTube’ is a very popular platform, not only famous
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on it. There are many category films we could search on YouTube.
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, and the cuisine programs etc. It may cause a trend which promoted public to deeply know their
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renewal program is a reason why more
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out about the history of their
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but
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living with them for a few days. Some
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less than the latter information. There is doubt that the history of the
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simple research that everyone can start with. In conclusion, if you want to introduce your hometown to others, acquaint your home is the most direct way to be the
first
step. The more understanding a place, the more touching story you know. So that you will become much cherish the time you live in your
house
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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