The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given three pie charts depict the proportion of three nutrients consumed by people in the USA in all typical
meals
throughout the day.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that sodium, saturated fat and sugar
are taken in less quantity during breakfast, whereas
they are taken in much larger quantities at dinner
comparative
to Replace the word
compared
lunch
.
To begin
with, the first chart shows the average quantity of rock salt taken by the people of the USA during their meals
of the day. Dinner
contains the highest ratio of sodium (43%), while
29% of it is eaten while
having lunch
. Breakfast and snacks
hold an equal proportion of rock salt, which is 14% each. The second
chart details the percentages of saturated fats in meals
. At dinner
time, Americans consume 37% of it, being at
the highest among all meal types. Change preposition
apply
Lunch
contributes to a consumption of 26% of it, followed by snacks
with 21% and the remaining snacks
with 16%.
Finally
, the last
chart illustrates the proportion of sugar
taken by Americans during all meals
. Snacks
contain the highest figure of it, 42%. A typical dinner
consists of 23% of sugar
in it, followed by lunch
with 19% and lastly
breakfast has the least amount of sugar
accounting for only 16%.Submitted by ankitapanjwani98 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meals, sugar, dinner, lunch, snacks with synonyms.
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