The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given three pie charts depict the proportion of three nutrients consumed by people in the USA in all typical
meals
throughout the day.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that sodium, saturated fat and
sugar
are taken in less quantity during breakfast,
whereas
they are taken in much larger quantities at
dinner
comparative
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to
lunch
.
To begin
with, the first chart shows the average quantity of rock salt taken by the people of the USA during their
meals
of the day.
Dinner
contains the highest ratio of sodium (43%),
while
29% of it is eaten
while
having
lunch
. Breakfast and
snacks
hold an equal proportion of rock salt, which is 14% each. The
second
chart details the percentages of saturated fats in
meals
. At
dinner
time, Americans consume 37% of it, being
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the highest among all meal types.
Lunch
contributes to a consumption of 26% of it, followed by
snacks
with 21% and the remaining
snacks
with 16%.
Finally
, the
last
chart illustrates the proportion of
sugar
taken by Americans during all
meals
.
Snacks
contain the highest figure of it, 42%. A typical
dinner
consists of 23% of
sugar
in it, followed by
lunch
with 19% and
lastly
breakfast has the least amount of
sugar
accounting for only 16%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words meals, sugar, dinner, lunch, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average percentages
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • meal
  • typical meals
  • categories
  • high percentage
  • distribution
  • patterns
  • trends
  • nutrient-dense
  • data
  • comparison
  • summarize
  • reporting main features
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