Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of students want to
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different high education. So
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want to
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institute, but a
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of Muslim countries parents do not want that children
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together. It is often argued, that
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I do not agree because I have many reasons for
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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