Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, nowadays a
lot
of students want to
study
different high education. So
boys
and
girls
want to
study
institute, but a
lot
of Muslim countries parents do not want that children
study
together. It is often argued, that
boys
and
girls
study
together at school and at the institute. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages in
this
essay. According to me, I agree with
this
solution. I have several reasons for it because it is necessary problem. Nowadays I think males and females
study
together all
time
.
Firstly
,
girls
take a
lot
of information immediately and the disused solution very accurately. The
boys
look at
this
as the situation and try to take knowledge. It is a huge motivation for
boys
. The
second
reason is opinions and views of each other. From my point of view women interesting take education than men. For
this
reason
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I think males and females should
study
together because have a
lot
of
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useful. At the same
time
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I do not agree because I have many reasons for
boys
and
girls
. I want to say something for them. in my opinion they getting to know each other and meeting up with each other. Maybe they love each other and stop thinking about education. It is big problem for knowledge. In my view maybe they
study
separately the
first
time
. I cannot spot meet each other/
Therefore
, I think the
first
time
they must
study
. Hanes, according to me I do not agree that male and female students in every subject.
However
, I want to
study
the
first
course alone. It is my opinion.
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