You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter - describe what you enjoyed about the course - say how much cooking you've done since the course -suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir I am Jully Willson,
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of the 'Italian Cookery' course, organized at your school
last
week. Writing you
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letter to share my rewarding experience
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the course of time. It was a
fun filled
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, learning journey. The pizza making workshop gave exposure to
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palatable varieties. Indeed personally,
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experience which covered the master chef live demo. The accurate measurements, ingredients, preparation time, plus tips and tricks are extremely helpful for a neophyte like me to prepare delicious dishes.
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, it has become part of my regular routine to try new recipes shared in handbooks distributed during the session. The simplicity of your cookery courses, which encourages everyone to cook perfectly, is really adorable. It would be amazing if there was an opportunity to learn baking. I would like to request you to organize these workshops as well in future. Looking forward to seeing
this
request being included in your itinerary. Yours Sincerely Jully Willson
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