You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which conatined some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter - correct the information in the article -explain wy it is important for the magazine to give correct information -suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir I am Navin Singh, resident of Jabalpur, India.
This
is in regards to informing you about an article printed in the 'The Week' magazine titled - 'Heaven on earth', which depicted the scenic beauty of our town and riverside spots suitable for
photo shoots
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. The content stated, the rainy season
being
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an apt period for photography at
riverside
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. As a matter of fact, it is the
most risky
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time to do so. Alongside the river banks, the surface becomes slippery.
Additionally
, the water flow is turbulent due to heavy storms.
Hence
, it is significant that
such
facts are transparently communicated by the author.
Furthermore
, missing
such
details could
also
lead to human life loss. In my opinion, there could be a fresh blog in continuation to the previous article.
This
content should elaborate
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correct details and precautions which could be taken to avoid any mishap.
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Thankyou
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for taking out time to read my letter. Please let me know if any
further
information is needed. Yours Sincerely Navin
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