You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - explain why you would lile the job -give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ -say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am Jully Willson, writing you
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letter in regards to your advertisement posted in 'The Week' magazine. Currently, I'm looking for a job in which I can be part of a homely environment. At the same time, be helpful in performing my responsibilities. For the past 8 years, my overall experience is in child care , working as a babysitter for renowned
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facilities. My genuine interest in looking after kids, taking care of their daily needs, showering them with motherly love and affection, being understanding and friendly with them, makes me feel that I could be an appropriate candidate for
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opportunity. In my free time, I would like to study business administration and complete my postgraduate degree.
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, it is my assurance that the aforementioned interest would not be an obstacle in serving children or compromise with my job responsibilities. Looking forward eagerly for your response. Yours Sincerely July Wills
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