Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In my point of view, gender inequality and discrimination are sensitive concerns and protests for these immoral issues have been happening as a matter of consequence in recent decades.

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, humanity

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witnessed tremendous achievements and substantial changes in a positive way of sexual equality

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as the

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to vote,

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remuneration and fairness in studying. Despite

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all the above successful accomplishments, I totally disagree that

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need to balance the number of students in each studying program regardless of

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and foremost, there is no possible method to keep the same proportion of

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and

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in every single

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in

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. In

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of logic and fact, student numbers depend on the quantity of

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and the proportion of genders that individual

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or

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receive.

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, each

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also

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receives

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number of

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and

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who participate in. As a matter of fact, some unique subjects

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as builder, engineer and computer programmer... are more popular with

male

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based on their distinctive features.

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, construction builder is a profession

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require

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lots of physical strength and steady health, no matter how we look at it in many ways,

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job is more suitable for

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because the physical health of

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is stronger than

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naturally. On another point, it would be inequitable to accept admission based on

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sex. For

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reason,

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and colleges should select appropriate candidates who are willing to study hard to get good grades and able to achieve success in their aspiration

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choices.

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, computer programming is a

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that

frequently

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accepted and more famous to

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but if one female candidate is interested in it and she knows that she could learn and be a developer in the future

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she deserves and has

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rights

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to take part in the course. If each university keeps

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to follow

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method system

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usual, everyone gets equal chances to study and develop their technical skills for their future careers. In conclusion, there are no useful purposes for balancing the proportion of

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and

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in every course at

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and it could be the main cause for trouble and unexpected situations which could happen at

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