Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
In my point of view, gender inequality and discrimination are sensitive concerns and protests for these immoral issues have been happening as a matter of consequence in recent decades.
However
, humanity have
witnessed tremendous achievements and substantial changes in a positive way of sexual equality Change the verb form
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such
as the rights
to vote, Fix the agreement mistake
right
equal
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equality
in
remuneration and fairness in studying. Despite Change preposition
apply
of
all the above successful accomplishments, I totally disagree that Remove the preposition
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universities
need to balance the number of students in each studying program regardless of genders
.
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gender
First
and foremost, there is no possible method to keep the same proportion of men
and women
in every single subject
in universities
. In term
of logic and fact, student numbers depend on the quantity of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
application
and the proportion of genders that individual Fix the agreement mistake
applications
university
or Fix the agreement mistake
universities
college
receive. Fix the agreement mistake
colleges
In addition
, each subject
also
receives different
number of Change the article
a different
the different
men
and women
who participate in. As a matter of fact, some unique subjects such
as builder, engineer and computer programmer... are more popular with male
based on their distinctive features. Add an article
a male
For instance
, construction builder is a profession which
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that
require
lots of physical strength and steady health, no matter how we look at it in many ways, Change the verb form
requires
this
job is more suitable for men
because the physical health of men
is stronger than women
naturally.
On another point, it would be inequitable to accept admission based on applicant's
sex. For Correct article usage
the applicant's
this
reason, universities
and colleges should select appropriate candidates who are willing to study hard to get good grades and able to achieve success in their aspiration subject
choices. For example
, computer programming is a subject
that frequently
accepted and more famous to Add a missing verb
is frequently
men
but if one female candidate is interested in it and she knows that she could learn and be a developer in the future then
she deserves and has Correct article usage
the rights
rights
to take part in the course. If each university keeps Fix the agreement mistake
right
continue
to follow Change the verb form
continuing
this
method system as
usual, everyone gets equal chances to study and develop their technical skills for their future careers.
In conclusion, there are no useful purposes for balancing the proportion of Add the comma(s)
,as
men
and women
in every course at universities
and it could be the main cause for trouble and unexpected situations which could happen at anytime
.Replace the word
any time
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