Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In my point of view, gender inequality and discrimination are sensitive concerns and protests for these immoral issues have been happening as a matter of consequence in recent decades.
However
, humanity
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witnessed tremendous achievements and substantial changes in a positive way of sexual equality
such
as the
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to vote,
equal
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remuneration and fairness in studying. Despite
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all the above successful accomplishments, I totally disagree that
universities
need to balance the number of students in each studying program regardless of
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.
First
and foremost, there is no possible method to keep the same proportion of
men
and
women
in every single
subject
in
universities
. In
term
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of logic and fact, student numbers depend on the quantity of
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and the proportion of genders that individual
university
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or
college
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receive.
In addition
, each
subject
also
receives
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number of
men
and
women
who participate in. As a matter of fact, some unique subjects
such
as builder, engineer and computer programmer... are more popular with
male
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based on their distinctive features.
For instance
, construction builder is a profession
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require
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lots of physical strength and steady health, no matter how we look at it in many ways,
this
job is more suitable for
men
because the physical health of
men
is stronger than
women
naturally. On another point, it would be inequitable to accept admission based on
applicant's
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sex. For
this
reason,
universities
and colleges should select appropriate candidates who are willing to study hard to get good grades and able to achieve success in their aspiration
subject
choices.
For example
, computer programming is a
subject
that
frequently
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accepted and more famous to
men
but if one female candidate is interested in it and she knows that she could learn and be a developer in the future
then
she deserves and has
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to take part in the course. If each university keeps
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to follow
this
method system
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usual, everyone gets equal chances to study and develop their technical skills for their future careers. In conclusion, there are no useful purposes for balancing the proportion of
men
and
women
in every course at
universities
and it could be the main cause for trouble and unexpected situations which could happen at
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.
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