Q. Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
Some believe the symbol of
success
is personal wealth and richness, while in other opinions, people
making a society
develop such
as inventors and scholars win more success
. Even though money
can bring about individual pleasure and comfort, I believe it is more successful that achievement for the society
makes the result of historical development and the prosperity of countries.
There is no answer to be
successful in Wrong verb form
being
a
life. Every person has Remove the article
apply
the
each standard of Remove the article
apply
success
, which they achieving individual happiness can have successful lives
or they should go on to greater accomplishments for their honor
. Admittedly, Change the spelling
honour
money
must be the essential condition to gain daily happiness as there are many people
to suffer from their
poverty in the world, and it can Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
found
the root of Wrong verb form
find
success
. For instance
, if people
win a large amount of wealth, they can have more stable and enjoyable lives
to spend money
on even relationship
with others as well as all they want. Many others would like to seek their wealthy Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
lives
. Thus
, it can be said money
is an
enough successful factor to afford those Correct article usage
apply
lives
.
Nevertheless
, people
working for their society
can be more successful since it is worth achieving their goals and honor
. It is more difficult to get over a great achievement than simply Change the spelling
honour
earn
Wrong verb form
earning
money
. Furthermore
, if one’s research or contribution is effective to society
, money
would automatically follow them as the
Correct article usage
apply
success
makes the society
develop and prosper more. Unfortunately, many rich people
have the lack of achieving through effort, attaining all they want easily by money
, while people
succeeding by their passion cannot only get their wealth and honor
, they Change the spelling
honour
also
can feel a fully
sense of accomplishment. Their Change the adverb
full
success
would affects
history due to their successful result of Change the verb form
affect
contribution
. For these reasons, Add an article
the contribution
people
contributing to society
would be more successful for both their countries and themselves.
In conclusion, individual
richness can lead to successful Add an article
the individual
lives
, which
the wealthy can receive all of personal entertainment. Change preposition
in which
On the other hand
, in my opinion, it is the authentic success
to win people
’ achievement by their effort, contributing to society
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