Q. Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
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. Even though Use synonyms
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society
makes the result of historical development and the prosperity of countries.
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or they should go on to greater accomplishments for their Use synonyms
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. Admittedly, Change the spelling
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For instance
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with others as well as all they want. Many others would like to seek their wealthy Fix the agreement mistake
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Thus
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enough successful factor to afford those Correct article usage
apply
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society
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honor
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honour
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Furthermore
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success
makes the Use synonyms
society
develop and prosper more. Unfortunately, many rich Use synonyms
people
have the lack of achieving through effort, attaining all they want easily by Use synonyms
money
, while Use synonyms
people
succeeding by their passion cannot only get their wealth and Use synonyms
honor
, they Change the spelling
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success
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history due to their successful result of Change the verb form
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contribution
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the contribution
people
contributing to Use synonyms
society
would be more successful for both their countries and themselves.
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individual
richness can lead to successful Add an article
the individual
lives
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which
the wealthy can receive all of personal entertainment. Change preposition
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On the other hand
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