Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe that actions can be taken to bring about the change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

In recent years human activity

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done much damage to the environment, some are arguing that these

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cannot be changed, while

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thinks that we could take measures to protect our surrounding. In

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essay I will be discussing both views and why in

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many things we can do as individuals to overcome

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issue.

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with, many people nowadays have

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opine the advancement of technology

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made our lives much easier and convenient. The price for

this

is the damage that we are doing to other creatures and the environment.

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, urbanization has decreased the

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in certain areas which was a major problem, but

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the other

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destroyed the habitats of many animals and

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.

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, deforestation

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led to

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construct

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rods which helped decrease traffic jam.

However

, due to the fact that we

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are the main cause of loads of environmental disasters

such

as climate change. The

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thing we can do is

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further

damage.

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one of the major cause of climate change is the greenhouse gases and carbon dioxide emission from vehicles.

Therefore

. By using public transportation or walking rather than using cars daily will

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the

amount

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of fumes

that is

exhaust from cars.

Furthermore

, segregating our waste before dumping them

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biodegradable and non-biodegradable containers.

In addition

to that governments should put penalties on the company’s factors that produce above the legal amount of carbon emission. In conclusion,

although

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the cardinal reason for many environmental

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.

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not mean that they cannot be part of the solution.