Many students decide to further their study abroad what are the benefits and drawbacks of studying aboard. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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two or three decades, students have been moving abroad for

study

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purpose

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an enormously than ever before due to globalization.

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,

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trend has some advantages as well as disadvantages too.

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essay discusses briefly for the following reasons, I think

benefits

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outweigh the drawbacks. There are some positive aspects of studying

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abroad who are pupils. One of the major advantages is that they gain broad wisdom

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a certified tutor with the world best laboratory facilities,

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, the quality of education can be gained who

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like to

study

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in

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overseas. Another benefit is that

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is a better chance to immigrate to overseas in

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way,

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, after

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completing they have a chance to getting an abroad citizen,

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, their's lifestyle will be improved compared to home country. Taking India

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, more than ten thousand students go to

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developed countries for

study

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purpose

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like Canada, Australia and Europe nations.

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,

there

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life becomes improved not only his life but

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his

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whole family too.

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, there are some drawbacks

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trend. One of the major disadvantages is that cultural shock, there are

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culture

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of graduates

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in overseas while initial time each and every student faces cultural shock ,

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, might be gotten loneliness from

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. Another drawback is that homesickness, if a pupil goes to studying

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overseas, he must be missed his family members,

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, he might be faced many troubles like depression and stress,

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can

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to getting

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illness.

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, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 40% of

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pupils suffer depression and stress in

ovrseas

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overseas

who are studying in another country. To conclude,

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styling

studying

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abroad is the best idea for

improving

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to

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their's lifestyle from poverty and they can be gotten broad wisdom from a quality

teateacher

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tea teacher

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Homesich

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Homesick

and cultural shock

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the drawbacks of

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trend. I think

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process has more advantages than disadvantages.

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hope

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process is conducive to improving the

students

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behaviour.