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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your email: Suggest a speaker Say what they would contribute to the event Explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
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 letter in regard to the announcement you made in the local newspaper on 10 December
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 2021. I would be happy to introduce
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 of the survivors of the Tokyo earthquake, Ms Smith. As you are aware many people lost their families and all belongings after a disaster. Ms Smith was
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 of them who never give up in the life battle and she
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 of the famous writers not only in Tokyo but
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 all around the world.
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, her books are all about the possible difficulties that
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 can face in a lifetime and some solutions were given in the book. Taking into account the issue that people, nowadays, have been encountered various problems ranging from the financial recession to losing their loved ones in the pandemic.
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, it is essential that the speaker be someone who achieves success after going through hard days and be able to pursue people for following their dreams. Please let me know if you are interested in inviting Ms smith to the event so I can send her contact information. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dorna Sadeghi
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