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Some think in today's modern world people depend on each other more. Others think the modern world is creating more independence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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While a majority of the community thinks
people
 are independent, others argue that some
people
 are still dependent on each other.
This
 essay will discuss both the views and
also
 the main reason why it is better to be independent. Every man has a free choice and would love to live their
life
 without anybody else's interference. In the modern world unlike the olden, days every person likes to be private with what they want to do in
life
. Dependency levels have become less as the technology has come to its peak making it possible for
people
 to get their hands on everything they need very easily. Even though most
people
 are free movers, some are still clinging to others to be able to move forward in
life
.
For example
 in some families, the oldest siblings who are well established take care of the younger ones, even if they are able to work and look after themselves they take the former for granted and rely on them for every single thing.
This
 practice has become increasingly problematic
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 since they are unable to express their feelings the older siblings go with the flow. In conclusion, it is always advisable to be a free man, rather than having to rely on somebody for your
life
's decisions or even for your simple day-to-day activities. Whether it is financially, physically or mentally it is better to be private. The modern world has created more independence so that
people
 can live at free will and live a happy and healthy
life
.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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