Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Improving public
health
has been a major concern lately. Many people
believe that providing good sports
facilities
is the best solution, whereas another group argues it will contribute only in a small part and requires metrics to measure performance. Although
creating good sports
facilities
might be a factor to make good public health
, increasing the number of sports
facilities
will be the only answer.
To begin
with, building good sports
facilities
will make people
stay healthy and prevent themselves from sickness. The facilities
will encourage people
to exercise
which is the main key to making people
in society healthy. However
, keeping good health
is not only a factor to make good public health
. There are many other factors
that should be considered to improve public health
. For example
, Bangkok has many good parks for runners. Runners tend to have better health
than people
who don't exercise
but many runners barely approach fundamental health
care such
as sufficient nutrition or yearly health
checkup.
On the other hand
, preventing sickness has many dimensions besides
from
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apply
exercise
. The fundamental living factors
need to be considered to provide good public health
such
as providing healthy food, making clean sanitation, vaccination, and etc. Without these factors
, sports
can't keep someone life. For instance
, exercise
people
rarely get sick from disease because their behaviour (exercise
every day) brust their immunity system to active and strong. Instead
, many of them don't have good health
because of
poor sanitation systems make them drink dirty water.
In conclusion, an increasing number of Change preposition
apply
sports
facilities
might make better public health
but it is not the best way to improve. There are many other fundamental factors
that need to be considered and improved in order to make the best solution.Submitted by ekkawin.v on
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