Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Improving public
health
has been a major concern lately. Many Use synonyms
people
believe that providing good Use synonyms
sports
Use synonyms
facilities
is the best solution, whereas another group argues it will contribute only in a small part and requires metrics to measure performance. Use synonyms
Although
creating good Linking Words
sports
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facilities
might be a factor to make good public Use synonyms
health
, increasing the number of Use synonyms
sports
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facilities
will be the only answer.
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To begin
with, building good Linking Words
sports
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facilities
will make Use synonyms
people
stay healthy and prevent themselves from sickness. The Use synonyms
facilities
will encourage Use synonyms
people
to Use synonyms
exercise
which is the main key to making Use synonyms
people
in society healthy. Use synonyms
However
, keeping good Linking Words
health
is not only a factor to make good public Use synonyms
health
. There are many other Use synonyms
factors
that should be considered to improve public Use synonyms
health
. Use synonyms
For example
, Bangkok has many good parks for runners. Runners tend to have better Linking Words
health
than Use synonyms
people
who don't Use synonyms
exercise
but many runners barely approach fundamental Use synonyms
health
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such
as sufficient nutrition or yearly Linking Words
health
checkup.
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On the other hand
, preventing sickness has many dimensions Linking Words
besides
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from
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apply
exercise
. The fundamental living Use synonyms
factors
need to be considered to provide good public Use synonyms
health
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such
as providing healthy food, making clean sanitation, vaccination, and etc. Without these Linking Words
factors
, Use synonyms
sports
can't keep someone life. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
exercise
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people
rarely get sick from disease because their behaviour (Use synonyms
exercise
every day) brust their immunity system to active and strong. Use synonyms
Instead
, many of them don't have good Linking Words
health
because Use synonyms
of
poor sanitation systems make them drink dirty water.
In conclusion, an increasing number of Change preposition
apply
sports
Use synonyms
facilities
might make better public Use synonyms
health
but it is not the best way to improve. There are many other fundamental Use synonyms
factors
that need to be considered and improved in order to make the best solution.Use synonyms
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