You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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, I am writing
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letter to tell you that I am very grateful for your kind action. Taking care of me during my recovery in the hospital was really noble
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you
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part.
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, I like to invite
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you to

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my house for
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apply

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dinner in order to return you the
favor
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favour

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. My name is Ali Hammoud. I am married with two kids: a girl aged sixteen and a young boy who will turn nine
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week. I live in a small flat
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in

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the
center
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centre

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of the city near to the train station, so it will be easy for you to reach my current address. In fact, I am amazed by what you did for me
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on

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the day of the accident. The nurse told me that you stayed there with my family during all my recovery days.
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I truly appreciate that you donated your blood to me where other strangers will consider many times before doing it.
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this
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occasion, I would offer you a family meeting
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Sunday at 8:00 PM as sign of gratitude. My wife will cook us a turkey with some vegetables from our garden. After that, we will celebrate the birthday of my younger child. Thank you again for everything, and I hope that you will accept my modest invitation. Yours faithfully, Ali Hammoud

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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