You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/

Madame

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, I am writing

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letter to tell you that I am very grateful for your kind action. Taking care of me during my recovery in the hospital was really noble

from

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you

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part.

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, I like to invite

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you to

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my house for

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dinner in order to return you the

favor

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. My name is Ali Hammoud. I am married with two kids: a girl aged sixteen and a young boy who will turn nine

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week. I live in a small flat

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the

center

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of the city near to the train station, so it will be easy for you to reach my current address. In fact, I am amazed by what you did for me

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the day of the accident. The nurse told me that you stayed there with my family during all my recovery days.

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, I truly appreciate that you donated your blood to me where other strangers will consider many times before doing it.

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this

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occasion, I would offer you a family meeting

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Sunday at 8:00 PM as sign of gratitude. My wife will cook us a turkey with some vegetables from our garden. After that, we will celebrate the birthday of my younger child. Thank you again for everything, and I hope that you will accept my modest invitation. Yours faithfully, Ali Hammoud

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

225 words

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