You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

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Dear Owen It has been a long

time

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since to saw you, I am writing

this

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letter to let you know about my great news. I currently moved into a recent

house

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. The news

house

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is middle size and located in the big city which has a gorgeous place.

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, there is a small pond in front of my

house

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. The other thing I want you to notice is about my neighbours who are very friendly. Most of them have been living here for a long

time

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. When I talk with them for the first

time

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, they are given some advice and suggestions which is very useful for me as a new member. To enjoy my new

house

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together, I want to invite you to visit my

house

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. At my

house

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, we can spend more

time

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here in order to celebrate my wonderful

house

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This

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is a great opportunity to meet you and our friends after missing for a long

time

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I hope to see you soon Lots of love Victor

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Make sure to proofread your letter to correct grammatical errors and improve sentence structure.

coherence cohesion

Use a variety of sentence structures to enhance readability and flow.

coherence cohesion

Organize your paragraphs clearly with one main idea each, supported by specific details.

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Address all parts of the task. Some descriptions are vague and could be improved with specific details.

coherence cohesion

Use paragraphing effectively to separate different ideas and keep the writing well-organized.

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Maintain an appropriate writing tone for a letter to a friend; a mix of formal and informal language can be suitable here.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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