You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear Owen It has been a long
time
since to saw you, I am writing
this
letter to let you know about my great news. I currently moved into a recent
house
. The news
house
is middle size and located in the big city which has a gorgeous place.
Moreover
, there is a small pond in front of my
house
. The other thing I want you to notice is about my neighbours who are very friendly. Most of them have been living here for a long
time
. When I talk with them for the first
time
, they are given some advice and suggestions which is very useful for me as a new member. To enjoy my new
house
together, I want to invite you to visit my
house
. At my
house
, we can spend more
time
here in order to celebrate my wonderful
house
.
This
is a great opportunity to meet you and our friends after missing for a long
time
I hope to see you soon Lots of love Victor
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Address all parts of the task. Some descriptions are vague and could be improved with specific details.
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