You recently went to a concert and thought one of te singers was very good. You want to tell him hoe you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - say how you feel about his performance -give details of your musical activities -explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Andy, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to you to express my opinion of your musical
night
. My name is June, I have been attended
to
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your even
on
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last
saturday
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night
, the
song
you sang was
amzing
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amazing
. I have never seen
a
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artisc
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artist
artists
artistic
like you,
which
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you can
sang
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a lot of different
song
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with a
becautiful
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beautiful
tone.
Besides
, you can
danced
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very well too. I
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really
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relly
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enjoy that every
song
you have
sang
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in
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that
night
and, it
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is
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it
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took me to the moon.
Therefore
, I would like to
invovel
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involve
you to join my
valunteen
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volunteer
Christmas even for the elderly people. The Christmas party is on the 20th Dec 2021, only for a
night
, is it located in the City hall
at
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6pm to 11pm. I have been decided to play some soft music, some of your we will be singing some Chrismas
song
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and your famous
song
.
Althought
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Although
, I know you are a busy man, but I would love you can bring some joy
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the old people. If you could sing some
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favour
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song
that will be very sensational. I hope you can come for that
night
, even just for an hour that will be very helpful, as you are the best singer in our country. Please let me know what you think. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you. Yours sincerely June
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