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There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?

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Nowadays, most of the people living in cities are complaining that
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 in public places is above the tolerance limit. There are myriad reasons for
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 problem that will be discussed in the below paragraphs along with a solution.
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, the Density of population has been surging in developed cities every day. To illustrate with numbers, the Bangalore City authorities have revealed in the latest press conference that more than 10 lakh new residents migrated from the rural area and started living in the city within the past 1 year. It is evident that growth in the number of residents urges more infrastructure and facilities. All the construction works create substantial
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 which is the main pressing problem among the neighbourhood residents.
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 to the above points, growth in population
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 reasons for the increase in vehicle usage. It creates a lot of
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 on public roads.
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, there are numerous solutions to get rid of the
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 issues. The most prevalent solution is distributing the civil development areas. planting more trees around the residential area will block the sound, and help to maintain less
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. In fact,
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 solution was implemented in Chennai City
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 year and has demonstrated successful results.
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, Inducing the new rules in the traffic control system
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 as marking a few sensitive areas like hospital and school areas as no horn zones.
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, these precautionary actions would help to control
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. In conclusion, while there are more sources that cause the
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 we can mitigate them with simple solutions.
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, Local Government authorities can look for amicable solutions to create a peaceful environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • noise pollution
  • urbanization
  • population density
  • traffic congestion
  • infrastructure development
  • public announcement systems
  • street performances
  • noise regulations
  • soundproof materials
  • public transportation
  • designated quiet zones
  • green spaces
  • buffer zones
  • public awareness
  • community efforts
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