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Prison is the best punishment for criminals. To what extant you agree or disagree ?

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Criminals indulge in illegal acts when they are let on loose, and they can be a potential threat
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society.So, it is critically important to find relevant punishment for their acts, and many believe that locking them up in prison is the best way on the cards.I partially agree with counting the jail term punishment and take
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 position in
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 of punishment. For various reasons,enclosing crime committers behind the bars is the best way to be disciplined .
Firstly
, the
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 can be a space for these anti-citizens to reflect on their malicious behaviour and to figure out the legalised path.
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, experiencing jail life is the perfect solution to defend inbuilt cruel thoughts through philosophical workshops and mind soothing meditation. Evidently, in various
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 murderers who had served hardships in
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, emerge out as responsible citizens.So, without
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, prisons are the best mentoring schools.
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 in illegitimate business need other treatments too.Undoubtedly, gaols can be
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one-stop confinement for merging delinquents which could potentially pose a serious threat to the community when the bandits are realised.So,a viable path
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 as directing them to the employment hub can be a better option.When the offenders are provided opportunities to earn income,certainly,they could deviate from the offensive route.In many instances,fighting for survival has pushed citizens to the wrongdoings.
Thus
, it is vital to open up flourishing possibilities. In conclusion, from the above
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 it is clear that prisons are not the only way to penalise villains,because
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 can
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 become the place for grooming threats. So,
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 to jail terms, these vicious people can be exposed to skill upgrading jobs.
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