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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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In
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 day and age, working everywhere seems to become a trend due to the rapid development of communication technology and transportation. In
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 essay, we will discuss some benefits and drawbacks of
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 issue. On the one hand, employees can enjoy the freedom of arrangement of their job. They can plan their work schedule based on their
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 but no limit with the location. Not only the place to work, but
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 the
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 cost.
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, some labour's working space is far away from their home. They can save the travelling
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 in order to spend the
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 on work.
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, most of the international companies are always have project meeting and their employees have to gather in one certain country to form a meeting.
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 will spend a period of
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 travelling from one city to another city.
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, there are some drawbacks that the well-develop technology brings to
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. It is obvious that
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 will rise the working hour.
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, some
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 are working from home, their senior or manager will expect they get ready anytime and always standby. When
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 wake up in the morning, they already stay in the working environment and seems to have not a clear
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 off. It is easy to cause mental health problems,
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 as pressure and depression, as the home should be a relaxed and resting area. In conclusion, the well-development of technology and transportation is convenient and it will lead to some social health issues. It
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 how to get used to
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 equipment, there are both advantages and disadvantages of
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 trend.
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