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In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending money in buying more and more items. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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The importance of environment, which was always debatable how to save
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 but has now more controversial with many
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 are deeming that
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 of the best ways to solve
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 problem is to raise the cost of
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 for cars and other transport. I completely disaccord with the statement
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 elaborate my viewpoint. On
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 hand, there are myriad reasons why
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 disagree with the statement but the
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 and foremost
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 is that
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 of
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 occurs imbalance in society because the high
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 of
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 afford only high-class
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, whereas the middle-class public cannot afford
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 so it is not possible that usage of fuel reducing by
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 way.
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, civilians should focus on other alternatives
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 as e-bike as well as public transport. By
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 environment is more effective to protect them.
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, long term results can be attained. Another worth considering an alternative to improve our environment which is the best way is using friendly
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 of automobiles. It is useful for reducing not only reducing toxic air but
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,
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 can live a long life without any hustle.
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,
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 can use automobiles like CNG and LPG These types of automobiles are considered eco-friendly fule. To conclude, according to the argument
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 can reach a conclusion I increasing
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price
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 is not worth it to save environmental problems while using another way like e-vehicles. I can not support the increasing the
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 of
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 due to these reasons.

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