You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing
this
letter to
know
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find out
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more details about the “Remote Sensing Determination of Evapotranspiration” seminar happening next month, regarding the dates, program, accommodation, and cost. In recent
time
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times
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, I
am
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have been
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working at the National Centre of Remote Sensing in my country as a civil engineer. Actually, I am very interested
to participate
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in participating
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in
this
workshop
that
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which
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would be useful for my current job
,
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apply
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and absolutely will add extra skills.
However
, I
will
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appreciate it if you could give me
further
information. Primary, I
Knew
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knew
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that the course
will
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would
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be held next month, but I did not find any exact dates on the website. I hope you inform me in order to organize my flight.
Moreover
, I want to know how the program will be organized
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Tutorials will be performed every day or there will be a break in between?
In addition
, what concerns the accommodation,
do
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the administration responsible for the workshop
has
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arranged
specific
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a specific
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settlement for the participants? At
last
, I have no idea about the cost, is it expensive or cheap? Are there any offers you provide?
Finally
, I heavily value your association,
hopefully
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and hopefully
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,
that
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you can answer me as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, China Tarhini.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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