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More and more young people use the Internet to socialize. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

#people #internet #development
In
this
 age of change, our youth have adopted social
media
 and the Internet as their way of socializing. Many complicated discussions revolve in our society, whether young
people
 should meet each other online or face to face. In my opinion, developing online friendships may be more useful for
our
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next
 generations.
For example
, they may get to know someone from another continent by just adding them as a friend on Instagram. There are many younger generations who adopt the idea that meeting
people
 online can create great friendship bonds.
Moreover
,
by
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 the help of online
platforms
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 we are able to get in touch with someone that we would never have the opportunity to.
In Particular
, we can add a person in Morocco to our friend list and generate close relationships at
such
 a young age. As well as becoming close, we may even visit each other one day.
Besides
, youngsters can get into
a
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search for their soulmate on
media
platforms
 which is much easier to accomplish on the web rather than trying traditional socializing methods. Somehow, there are tremendous numbers of believers
which
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 outcome to a belief that trying to get to know
people
 online harms our social life skills and interactions between
people
. To specify more, only texting to
people
 may narrow the speaking skills of our youth.
Further
, just communicating on the web is surely enough to decrease self-trust and raise our anxiety. As far as I have seen, social
media
platforms
 and meeting
people
 online is
such
 a brilliant opportunity that has enlightened our age. Particularly, meeting
people
 all across the globe is the most precious thing. To add on, these apps have changed the direction of humanity's destiny and younger
people
adapt
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adopt
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this
 system very well. In conclusion, socializing apps are very useful ways of communication.
Further
, it may expand youth's knowledge of cultures and list of
people
 they know.
However
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 these
platforms
 should not be used very intensely, unless
it
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they
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 may harm self-trust and
ability
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the ability
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of speaking
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 in person. Humanities future lies in social
media
 apps.
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