Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it is difficult to establish boundaries between what should be learned at
school
and what parents should teach their children
. Some people believe that schools are responsible to prepare pupils to be good members of society, while others think this
must be done by parents. In my opinion, families are the main ones responsible for education
, while school
is the place where this
is complemented by studying and interacting with other students.
Families play an important role when it comes to teaching children
. At home
, principles like respect and responsibility should be thought before they are sent to school
. If a child doesn’t learn how to respect the teacher and his peers, he might have trouble learning and building friendships, which is the first
step to be
a good member of society later in life. Wrong verb form
being
In addition
, at home
, children
will develop their first
personality character that will mirror the education
given by their tutors. If the parents are often disrespectful with others, the children
will take this
as normal and will behave in a similar way at school
and this
will affect also
their relationship with their future working colleagues.
School
is essential to prepare children
for future life. It is the place, to practice and apply the principles that were taught at home
. At school
, everything that was taught with the family will be tested, while participating in group works, by being punctual to class every day and also
by learning how to plan and prioritize. Furthermore
, all these are essential skills that will be used on a daily basis at work, for example
.
In conclusion, the basics of education
like respect and responsibility should be learned at home
, for later to be complemented by school
education
, in my opinion, this
will help children
to be successful members of society.Submitted by m.aen.guiomar on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite