Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

It is often an argued issue whether

team

sports are good or

individuals

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games by many TV

debate

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shows we can see that.

However

, some think that group games give more benefit who are the

players

while others say that

individuals

sports offer

many

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usefulness.

This

essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with,

team

pastimes can be given more beneficial among the

players

such

as showing

team

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spirit

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sprit

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spirit

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and

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teamwork

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team work

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teamwork

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. These kinds of pastimes can

be interacted

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while

players

are being played and all

team

members can contribute to their's

team

,

thus

, each and every person's ability can show to others in one athletic.

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, the

world famous

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sports

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sport

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which

is

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are

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Foot ball

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Football

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,

this

game should be needed

team

sprits,

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teamwork

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team work

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teamwork

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and

team

coordination. All

players

are played for winning their's

team

,

hence

,

this

is the best chance to show

of

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their's

team

unity.

In contrast

,

individuals

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individual

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pastimes could be indicated a person's talent and ability

an

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enormously in games because he is a hero of the exercise, he only plays for

hisself

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himself

,

therefore

,

players

can play extremely well and they are able to use any technique between exercise.

For instance

,

Indian

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chess master

who

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Mr Visvanath Anand,

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uses any technique his match for win match and he never asks anyone to take

decision

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a decision

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between

exercise

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exercises

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.

Therefore

,

individuals

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individual

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tournaments can describe

to

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the performer's ability and skill

throughly

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thoroughly

through

. To conclude, tournaments give more enthusiasms and willingness towards life who are the performers. Squad athletics indicated

team

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spirit

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sprit

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spirit

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,

team work

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teamwork

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and

team

coordination among the groups. An individual athletic can be

showed

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shown

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a single person's capability who is

player

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playing

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.

However

, in my opinion, about

this

,

tornaments

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tournaments

recreations

is

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the best rather than an individual recreation because group recreations can be played more members in one

events

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.