Nowadays, sending children to boarding school is becoming increasing popular. It is a positive or negative development?

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students
to
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boarding school is becoming popular day by day. It has positive impacts but negative consequences
hard
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to avoid. I will discuss both views in
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essay. Education plays
vital
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role
for
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making the bright future of individuals. Boarding
schoola
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schools
school
are the sources of advanced education. Along with other classes
tution
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tuition
class
available
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there for the
students
.
Also
, competitive exams
such
as ITT, JEE Mains etcetera
also
prioritised to educate in the boarding class. These efforts help a child to make success the life. The boarding institutes facilitate them not only with low fees but
also
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free
accomodation
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accommodation
.
Moreover
,
learner
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the learner
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can
also
inhance
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enhance
their skills ( sports, singing, dancing) by
pulishing
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publishing
polishing
it because they
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all kind of activities under one roof which is
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. They can
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their time by developing their skills.
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Besides
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this
,
students
of boarding school
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without their parents. Own to
this
, generation-gap increases to
such
extant which cause isolation of them.
Thus
, many conflicts took place.
Furthermore
, most of the time has been
spented
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spent
in the
hostals
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hostels
. They are unable to experience the home-
exitement
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excitement
. They
competely
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completely
detached from their rituals and moral values of life.
Therefore
, they find some difficulties
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in
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society. In conclusion,
although
boarding schools are the best source to providing academic education
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there are some manners which can
educated
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to the
students
by their parents.
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