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write about a meal that is popular in your country. what ingredients you use, the instrunction on how you make it and why it is popular

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My favourite meal is Ghormeh Sabzi with rice. To make
this
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 delicious
food
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 you need 600 gr lamb, 200 gr red bean. a big onion, 1 kg rice, some vegetables, salt, pepper, Turmeric and some oil. At
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first
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,first
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 you chop onions and add
it
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them
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in
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to
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 hot oil. After 3-5 minutes you add salt, pepper and
turmenic
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turmeric
. Three minutes later you add 600 gr lamb that you
choped
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chopped
 before and red beans. After that five
minutes
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,minutes
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 you add three
glass
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glasses
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 of water till
boil
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boiling
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 it. it prolongs two hours for cooking and
then
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 you add some fried
vegtables
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vegetables
 and after
1 hour
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1-hour
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food
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 is ready to eat. you eat
this
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food
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 with rice and enjoy it.
This
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food
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 is a popular
food
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 in my country. it is really a
traditionally
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traditional
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food
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 that most
of
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apply
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people
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the people
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 like
it
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apply
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. Everybody can eat
this
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food
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once
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one
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once
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 a week. It's very delicious.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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