write about a meal that is popular in your country. what ingredients you use, the instrunction on how you make it and why it is popular

#country #ingredients #instrunction

My favourite meal is Ghormeh Sabzi with rice. To make

this

delicious

food

you need 600 gr lamb, 200 gr red bean. a big onion, 1 kg rice, some vegetables, salt, pepper, Turmeric and some oil. At

first

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you chop onions and add

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them

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hot oil. After 3-5 minutes you add salt, pepper and

turmenic

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turmeric

. Three minutes later you add 600 gr lamb that you

choped

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chopped

before and red beans. After that five

minutes

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you add three

glass

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glasses

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of water till

boil

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it. it prolongs two hours for cooking and

then

you add some fried

vegtables

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vegetables

and after

1 hour

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food

is ready to eat. you eat

this

food

with rice and enjoy it.

This

food

is a popular

food

in my country. it is really a

traditionally

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food

that most

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apply

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people

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the people

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apply

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. Everybody can eat

this

food

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once

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one

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once

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a week. It's very delicious.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Summary
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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

147 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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write about a meal that is popular in your country. what ingredients you use, the instrunction on how you make it and why it is popular

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people believe that people stay fit if they joing gym and sports Club while other think that they stay fit doing walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views along your opinion

Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars,trucks and motorcycle are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses , taxes and metro on vehicle-free days. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is better?

In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult? What is your opinion about this?