Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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, nowadays a lot of students want to
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different high education. The
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and girls want to
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at an institute, but in several Muslim
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parents do not want that children
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together. It is often argued, that young people
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together at school and at the institute. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages in
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, my little brother studies at
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where
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are together and it helps to gain more knowledge. From my point of view little girl’s interest take education than little
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, I do not agree because I have many reasons for
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and girls. I want to say something to them. In my
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, they get to know each other and meet up with each other. Maybe they love each other and stop thing about education. It is big problem for knowledge. In my view, maybe they
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. I cannot spot meet each other/
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they must
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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