You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Manager,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. I am writing this
letter to address a situation I recently faced at your restaurant
. Me and my colleagues constantly meet at your restaurant
, and the last
meal was not satisfactory.
Yesterday, we came to the restaurant
at about 12:00pm for lunch, We ordered biryani and soup, the spice levels are very high in biryani, and the soup is watery. Furthermore
, the service that we used to get previously, was not there anymore. This
situation may be because of the new staff.
Moreover
, I suggest you train your staff in customer service like how to treat and behave with the customers, and should improve the quality of food. Your restaurant
is the first place that we chose for our business meetings, and we spent a lot every single time we visited there. I would appreciate it if you look into this
concern, and take the necessary steps to solve the issue, or we should stop coming there. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Srinivas Varma.Submitted by varmaib1 on
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coherence cohesion
To improve the coherence and cohesion, ensure there's a smoother transition between paragraphs. This can be achieved by using linking words or phrases such as 'additionally', 'furthermore' (which you have used), or 'consequently'. This will enhance the flow of ideas.
task achievement
For the task response, try to expand on each point you mention. For instance, when discussing the issues with the meal and service, provide more specific details or examples of how these affected your experience. This provides a complete picture to the reader.
task achievement
Continue to use a polite and formal tone suitable for writing to a manager about a service issue, as you've done. This is key in maintaining a suitable writing tone.
coherence cohesion
Consider closing your letter on a more hopeful or positive note. For example, expressing anticipation for future improvements can encourage a positive response from the reader.