Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do yoa think this is happening? What can governments do to help redace the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Currently, people around the
world
face the
problem
of pollution because of rubbish quantity.
This
essay will discuss reasons for
such
social phenomena and about measures which should be taken to reduce
this
amount of
trash
.
First
of all, we should consider the main reason why the quantity of rubbish is increasing on a constant basis. I believe, it is closely connected with enlarging of the human population. I mean that as more individuals we have as many goods fabrics have to produce. In
this
way, increasing of quantity of humanity is roughly connected with the amount of rubbish which humanity should recycle.
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but not
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reason is closely connected with
development
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the development
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of different industries. As more plants we have, as much
trash
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we will have in
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.
Last
but not least there a lot of individuals who do not to take any action in order to solve the
problem
, because they have become lazy because of progress. The government of each country has to highlight a clear intention to solve
this
crucial
problem
. I believe that it can have a direct impact on every person in the
world
. So, governments can create more strict laws regarding ecological problems in order to manage to problems of
trash
and dumps. As I know, there is a decree in the
world
which was accepted by main countries with a similar sense, but there are difficulties in implementing the Law in a real life.
Nevertheless
, we a have a perfect experience of Scandinavian countries where people have created plants for recycling of goods and getting of energy from the
trash
. To sum up, the
problem
of
trash
is existing over the
world
. And Governments can solve
this
problem
if
intentions
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and clearness of the aim will be similar to each party involved.
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