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The plans show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The plans illustrate the design of an
airport
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 now and how it is going to change after redevelopment
next
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 year. In general, the immediate impression is that after redevelopment, many new facilities will be added to
this
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airport
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such
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 as a bag drop part, an ATM, a sky train, and so on. Some of the places in
this
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airport
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;
however
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, will remain unchanged.
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, the walking way is planned to be omitted.
First
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 of all, it is designed to increase the number of gates as well as arrival and
departure
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 entrances. By way of illustration, gates are going to experience a rise from 8 to 18.
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, arrival and
departure
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 entrances are planned to be doubled.
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, it is decided to establish a sky train
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 of the walking way. It is worth mentioning that security and passport control parts in the
departure
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 section and passport control and custom parts in the arrival section are going to stay unchanged. In terms of the
departure
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 section, café and check-in places are going to be replaced and a new part which is a bag drop place is planned to be put in
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 place.
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, in the current plan of the southwest
airport
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, there is not anything special before exiting from the arrival entrance;
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, in the new design, a café, an ATM, and a car hire part will be constructed. A shop,
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 but not least, will start to work just before reaching gate 1.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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