In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

It's going to be common between some nations to have a

gap

of a

year

between high

school

and university. As they can use

this

gap

for working or going abroad for fun. Taking a break between high

school

and

the

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university has some clear benefits and some drawbacks. On

one

hand, it's good to work for a

year

after high

school

. Because we can earn good money as a saving, so when we want to continue our higher education, we will have a good budget.

Hence

, we don't need to go for a loan and add more stress on ourselves.

Moreover

, going abroad after graduating from high

school

can help us to celebrate our success. And that would be enough time to relax

ourselves

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and make us ready for university without the previous anxiety that we got from high

school

.

On the other hand

,

this

is a good idea to don't waste our time and constantly continue our education. It's clear,

one

year

is not a short period of time. ,

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we will forget our previous lessons. Because we will not be in contact with our study for

one

or more years. To give a clear example of my experience, I took

one

year

gap

between my study, after high

school

. Just because of

this

that I wanted to get married, and I went back home. When I came back from my back home

,

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and went to college I felt that I forget a lot of staff. Which needs a strong review that took me a month to prepare myself for college. To sum ,up the topic, taking a

gap

between high

school

and higher education has some positive

points

and some negative

points

. Which plus

points

overweight its minus

points

.