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some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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humans have spent their time for education for almost 23 years
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 studying at
university
 or college,
this
 is because there are many
people
 who believe that going straight to universities after high school is the best path to have a successful career in the future.
However
, there are some
people
 who believe that it would be better to get a
job
 after graduating from school. The following paragraph will be discussing both views.
Therefore
, the conclusion and my opinion have been reached. On the one hand, those who believe that aim for a
job
 after school might have an idea that if we get a
job
 as soon as possible,
this
 will make those
people
 have more time to work and figure out what career is best for them and they will have more experiences than those who go straight to
university
 which is very crucial to apply for a
job
.
For example
, if we go straight for a
job
 right after graduating, we will have more time to work on our
job
 and will have a higher salary base than new force workers.
On the other hand
, those who believe that studying at
university
 is the best route for having a successful career might have a perspective that studying at
university
 is not only study for knowledge but it is a chance to find connections in the societies.
For instance
, many
people
 have successful careers because of their better connections than those who go straight to get a
job
,
also
people
 who go to universities will have higher positions than those who do not go to universities. In conclusion, the former and latter paragraphs represent both views of both groups. From my perspective, I agree with the latter group because after we graduate from
university
, that knowledge and connection will surely be useful for us in the future.
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