An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Lena, I am so excited to hear that you want to come to Vietnam for your holiday. I am writing to give you some information and advice about

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trip.

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, the accommodation is various in Ha Noi, so you could choose at hotels or home-stay depending on your favourite. In fact, the home-stay price is around 10$ per night and the hotel's cost is above 20$. If you pick a room in

home-stay

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the home-stay

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, you will share

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room with other people. Anyway, you can search

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for all

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information about them

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Travel.com.vn Websites.

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, I know that you are interested in Vietnamese history, so the best attractive place for you is Ho Chi Minh Museum, which contains

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a thousand

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historical

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of historical

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pictures and films.

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, you should go to the sightseeings like Guom Lake or The Huc Bridge and try Vietnamese special dishes. I am highly

recomended

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recommended

Bun cha with noodles and porks or Banh Cuon, a rice cake with

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apply

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fish sauce. I believe you will like them. By the way, the weather in summer is extremely hot;

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, don't forget your hats and T-shirts to have a comfortable holiday. Please give me a call when you are in Ha Noi, and let me know if you need any help! Wish you all the best, Wendy

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

216 words

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