Some people think it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The importance of planting
trees
in the world
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trees
are very helpful to create fresh
air
. So some people deem that
trees
must be planted in open space of town by people compared to building more home. I accord entirely with the nations and
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essay will
further
elaborate on the plantation of
trees
in
cities
. Commencing with the most prominent reason why
trees
are a pivotal part of like as well as it must be planted in place of
cities
because it helps to decrease the
temperature
of surrounding areas. By
this
, we have seen the
temperature
rates in towns generally is high.
As a result
, we should plant
trees
where some areas of
cities
because it reduces the
temperature
of the environment.
For example
, in India, there are many
cities
as well as the government faced
temperature
problem
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problems
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of
cities
so the government would take the mission of plantation in
such
cities
like Delhi. Another worth considering the reason
of
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my agreement is affixed with the improved
air
qulity
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quality
index, which does not only matter for human life but
also
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is effective on animals as well as
food
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cycle. By
this
,
trees
help improve the
air
quality index by producing O2 in the
air
.
Therefore
, mankind has seen that in
such
places where
trees
are more there
air
quality index is below
the
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100,
it
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is
the
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good number
among
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this
pollution. To conclude, even though the housing needs of humans, I think we can not survive without
trees
for
better
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environment of the world and better health.
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