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Some people think it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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The importance of planting
trees
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 in the world
because
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trees
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 are very helpful to create fresh
air
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. So some people deem that
trees
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 must be planted in open space of town by people compared to building more home. I accord entirely with the nations and
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 elaborate on the plantation of
trees
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 in
cities
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. Commencing with the most prominent reason why
trees
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 are a pivotal part of like as well as it must be planted in place of
cities
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 because it helps to decrease the
temperature
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 of surrounding areas. By
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, we have seen the
temperature
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 rates in towns generally is high.
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, we should plant
trees
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 where some areas of
cities
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 because it reduces the
temperature
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 of the environment.
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, in India, there are many
cities
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 as well as the government faced
temperature
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problem
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 of
cities
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 so the government would take the mission of plantation in
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cities
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 like Delhi. Another worth considering the reason
of
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 my agreement is affixed with the improved
air
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qulity
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quality
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it
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is effective on animals as well as
food
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the food
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 cycle. By
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,
trees
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 help improve the
air
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 quality index by producing O2 in the
air
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.
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, mankind has seen that in
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 places where
trees
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 are more there
air
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 quality index is below
the
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apply
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100,
it
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 is
the
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 good number
among
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 pollution. To conclude, even though the housing needs of humans, I think we can not survive without
trees
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 for
better
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a better
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 environment of the world and better health.

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