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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The
government
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 has an important role. Some believe it should be only
one
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 over the globe rather than each country having its own
government
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.
This
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 essay will highlight the disadvantages of the
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 governmental
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, which outweighs their advantages, in the following paragraphs. The main disadvantage is that
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 can not provide the requirements of all people over the world.
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 is because of great differences in the
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 needs, which may result in a number of people who will be more hungry, while are not.
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, the union in Russia before 1988,
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 of difference among the
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 in their requirements, that union destroyed and each group made their own nation. Even with advanced technology and authority power, the idea of
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 authority is not fair for all populations.
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, any attempt to have
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 governmental
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 have more drawbacks than benefits.
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, the
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body
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 is unable to tackle the problem of the
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 who are from different races and religions, if the area is under
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 control. Because it is impossible to have employees in that
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 from all backgrounds, who are able to do that.
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, if there is
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government
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 over the world, those countries that are less than a million
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 will not have the same chance as other countries
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 as Chain in terms of tackling their issues. Without having their employees in a governmental
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, the small areas may affect more.
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,
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government
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 is negatively affecting some nations more than others. In conclusion, if there is
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government
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 over the globe, there will be more disadvantages more than advantages. The requirements of all populations may not achieve in a fair manner and their many problems resulted from different races.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • centralized policies
  • international cooperation
  • global economy
  • trade barriers
  • military spending
  • authoritarian control
  • cultural diversity
  • national identities
  • local issues
  • homogenized
  • decision-making
  • democratic representation
  • world peacekeeping force
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