For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter:
Dear
Mr.
Joe, My name is Elyn and I Change the punctuation
Mr
am
Wrong verb form
have been
member
of the Royal Add an article
a member
Club
since 2015, my member ID is 1122. I am writing this
letter to inform you regarding the termination of my membership from
Change preposition
in
Club
Royal in London, due to
personal reasons. As i
mentioned, I was a regular member of Change the capitalization
I
this
community for a
Correct determiner usage
quite a
quiet
long time but past Correct word choice
apply
one
year Correct pronoun usage
apply
i
was busy with my work and could not make it to the Change the capitalization
I
club
. I hold a premium membership card which i
was purchased at the time of joining. Change the capitalization
I
Initial
payment of $300 was Correct article usage
The initial
done
Verb problem
made
by
cash and later every month $150 was debited from my account. If you want I can submit the receipts and bank transactions history. Change preposition
in
Apart from
this
, i
would like to express my sincere thanks to Change the capitalization
I
club's
fitness centre and the coach. I have benefited a lot from doing daily exercises and the fitness equipment is really useful and premium quality. The weight loss program conducted at Correct article usage
the club's
club
was successful for me and Add an article
the club
i
Change the capitalization
I
loss
almost 10 kgs all thanks to the fitness team. Replace the word
lost
Moreover
, I gained freiends
from Correct your spelling
friends
this
community and we are still in touch. It is really Replace the word
disheartening
disheartened
to discontinue from Replace the word
disheartening
this
estemeed
Correct your spelling
esteemed
club
however
Capitalize word
I
i
need to relocate to my new hometown Capitalize word
I
stanford
which is about 100 Change the capitalization
Stanford
kms
Correct your spelling
km
far
from Rephrase
away
this
place. I hope the Royal club
will soon open its new venture in my new hometown. If you need any additional information please feel free to contact me. Looking Capitalize word
Club
formward
to hearing from you. Regards, ElynCorrect your spelling
forward
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.