You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • Describe the problem • Say how long it has been a problem • Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you about keeping your garbage bags near our gate.

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of all, putting garbage in front of someone else's house is not appropriate and there is a bad smell in the entire area because of that. And in my opinion,

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could lead to health issues as well since

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house flys' will carry germs everywhere.

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has been happening since

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May, and I know for a fact that

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may be due to the unorganized visits of the cleaning service.

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, I was being patient as I didn't want to cause any conflicts between us. I would really appreciate it if you could arrange a place behind your home or even outside your gate, which has a lid on it so, that it won't be smelly and spill everywhere.

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, you could contact the district provincial office and get the scheduled visit days of the cleaning truck. I kindly request you to take immediate action on

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matter. Best Regards,

Malsha

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Marsha

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Munasinghe

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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