Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion

Nowadays, it becomes an issue that to make business connections with native countries is a positive or negative impact, whereas, many
community
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offend that change, but some masses welcomed it from their heart. Personally, I feel it is a great step towards the progress of the
country
.
Firstly
, the business between the nations makes new possible ways to boost the economy where the public get good employment opportunities with satisfactory income. It not only supports countries economies but
also
improves the infrastructure.
For example
, India is a developing
country
so, it needs aids from other nations .
Therefore
, India welcomes other nations to invest their money in their
country
like to give land for
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up their head office and make plants for increasing the production.
However
, the biggest fear is that it affects the
culture
of the
country
, crowed easily influence the western
culture
,
therefore
, the extension of their own
culture
is becoming the biggest issue in some countries. Like, in my own state Punjab which is known for its
culture
and values, but now
people
forget it. According to a recent survey,
people
don't know the main festivals and their history which is very shameful for their youngsters. If
people
leave behind their roots they don't survive any long so
people
keep that thing in their mind. In conclusion,
although
people
oppose that change to save their
culture
and values, it can't be neglected for well fair for the
country
so ,
people
need to be patient to accept
this
change.
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