Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion
Nowadays, it becomes an issue that to make business connections with native countries is a positive or negative impact, whereas, many
community
offend that change, but some masses welcomed it from their heart. Personally, I feel it is a great step towards the progress of the Change to a plural noun
communities
country
.
Firstly
, the business between the nations makes new possible ways to boost the economy where the public get good employment opportunities with satisfactory income. It not only supports countries economies but also
improves the infrastructure. For example
, India is a developing country
so, it needs aids from other nations . Therefore
, India welcomes other nations to invest their money in their country
like to give land for set
up their head office and make plants for increasing the production.
Replace the word
setting
However
, the biggest fear is that it affects the culture
of the country
, crowed easily influence the western culture
, therefore
, the extension of their own culture
is becoming the biggest issue in some countries. Like, in my own state Punjab which is known for its culture
and values, but now people
forget it. According to a recent survey, people
don't know the main festivals and their history which is very shameful for their youngsters. If people
leave behind their roots they don't survive any long so people
keep that thing in their mind.
In conclusion, although
people
oppose that change to save their culture
and values, it can't be neglected for well fair for the country
so , people
need to be patient to accept this
change.Submitted by grewalpt1249 on
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