You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Manager, I am writing to you in order to get your kind approval on performing a presentation in our company building. In fact, I participated in a conference about green buildings, and I like to share
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subject with my colleagues for one hour only. As you know, our company is a huge influencer in the construction industry, so I thought all materials related to
environment
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as an added value for all employees. Actually, I will
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the importance of including clean energy in
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new projects
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as solar panels, wind turbines and hydraulic plants. I am planning to present my work in the conference room
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Thursday at 4:00 PM
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compartible
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with your schedule. I
also
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like to invite all our workers in
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to benefit the most with
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valuable information and to help improve our staffs' skills. I would really appreciate your consideration and your permission to organize
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meeting. Yours faithfully, Ali Hammoud
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