Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

Is there any ending for human suffering on

this

plant ?

Everyday

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, we see young children dead on

streets

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the streets

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because

lack

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of lack

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of daily

essentiels

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essentials

such

as nutrition, health care and education. In the

last

centuries, the world has suspected huge social differences between two main parts : developed countries and the poor ones.

Therefore

, I believe wealthy people should start to help others

whish

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are in

critical

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a critical

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situation

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situations

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for historical and survival causes.

First

of all, many nations conquered weak populations in the past leaving them without any resources. In fact, their project was to expand the geographical limits of the kingdom.

For instance

, the

british

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British

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empire was known

with

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for

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the fact which sun remain all the year in its territory as a symbol of gigantic expansion. As

results

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result

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, different

cultutres

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cultures

were included as parts of one authority that used their manpower , natural energy and raw materials.

This

reality

force

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forces

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rich

persones

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persons

person

to share part of their fortune

that is

orginally

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originally

possessed by others. Another reason, humanity is under the threat of extinction, if we continue fighting

on

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for

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money and power. Nobody can ignore the dangerous actions used on fragile communities in order to increase the quality of life for one small group only. Researches show that 90% of global wealth are

distrubted

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distributed

between 5% of

world

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the world

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population, while the other 95% are suffering to satisfy their daily needs. So, what if

this

treasure were well-shared on

this

planet ? Our race will continue to involve

to

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us to

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reach our future generations. To conclude, wealthy groups are directly responsible to assist needed families with jobs, and they must provide

them

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necessary

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with necessary

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facilities like hospitals, schools and charities. I hope that we start to look for each other in

more

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a more

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compassionate way in order to eliminate the discrimination from our societies.