Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge experience.

Nowadays, young people are suffering from any kind of sickness that mostly applied to

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happened with obesity which

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common amongst children currently. There are several reasons is

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issue that will discuss in

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essay followed by examples, as well as possible solutions to be taken.

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with,

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lifestyle is now becoming a behaviour of youngsters.

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, they rather stay inside the house and stick

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their gadget or play video games than go to outside

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proper and enough exercise grow overweight is unavoidable.

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, while they just sitting or lying inside playing games or stuff, it is more likely they

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provide snacks, soda or

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to consume so that they

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get bored fastly. In conclusion, unhealthy dietary

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and

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a sedentary

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lifestyle,

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major

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part in causing obesity

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yougsters

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youngsters

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to deal with some part of

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elements

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as

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or guardians

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and educators.

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,

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role in

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to ensure their kids

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healthy food and take

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sufficient time to exercise or join outside

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. They can invite their child for camping, fishing or so on.

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,

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and

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should conduct many more

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games

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which involved students inter-class so that they may practice for the game and spend more time

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outside

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extracurricular

in all

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of

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essential. Sometimes teenagers have

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in

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but there are limited facilities for them to use, so they just choose another easier way to spend time

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as playing video games. To sum up, sedentary lifestyle and dietary

habit

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are the main causes of obesity for teens.

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and

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schools

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play

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role to overcome

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issue by balancing their inside

activities

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with some physical

activities

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like

sports

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or camping.

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or guardians

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responsible to ensure what kind of food they consume and balancing them with

nutritious

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a nutritious

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meal.