Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Technology has become an

indispensible

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indispensable

part of every person

life

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it is sometimes thought modern

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

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have become

oue

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our

one

life

more efficient, others believe that these

tools

make some

difficulities

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difficulties

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both merits and

demeits

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demerits

of using modern devices. There are several reasons why labour-saving

equipments

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equipment

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are useful to decrease

stress

. The

first

and foremost important thing is that

time saving

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. Nowadays both men and women are working and they do not have

time

for

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household

chores

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when they need to do some additional domestic works after their job they feel their

life

is very stressful.

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survey in the UK,

people

can feel relaxed and

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when they have modern

tools

such

dishwasher

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dishwashers

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, robotic

vaccume

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vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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, washing

machine

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machines

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and so on.

Furthermore

, if they have these

tools

, they have extra

time

then

they can spend a good quality

time

with their family.

Hence

, labour-saving

tools

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important to decline

stress

. Another reason to consider that communication

tools

make

life

very easy means

people

can work in any corner of the world,

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internet and computer make it possible.

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, during

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a pandemic

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pandemic

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, employees are encouraged to work from home and it is

convenient

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a convenient

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way to jobs.

Moreover

, there are many applications available to communicate to those

people

who live anywhere across the world

such

as Facebook,

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app,

Instragram

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Instagram

etc.

Thus

, modern devices provide immense benefits.

On the other hand

, every garden has weeds, there are some

drawabcks

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drawbacks

also

Firstly

, due to long sitting for

job

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a job

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at home, human's

life

is very sedentary.

Secondly

, without

physicall

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physical

physically

work

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people

face many

disease

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diseases

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diabetis

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diabetes

Therefore

, they think about how to keep them fit and healthy,

this

situation

increase

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stress

in their

life

. In the conclusion, it is true that modern technology

equpiments

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equipment

equipment's

are very helpful in daily

life

and reduce

the

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stress

, but the negative effects should not

negelect

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neglect

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