You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Writing a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter . Describe what you enjoyed about the course . Say how much cooking you have done since the course . Suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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letter finds you well ,I am writing

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letter regarding the request for feedback about the cookery course which I recently attended at your institution .

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,with I have to say that was really amusing and I really enjoyed it and I have been living alone and I have to make food every day so It was entertaining for me,

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,I learnt a lot of recipes from many different countries all over the worlds

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as Italian meals , Indian cuisines, Mexican food, and so on .

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,I have learnt how to apply different things which I have been taught ,

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,when I have completed the course ,I have consistently prepared dishes every day,

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, each week I cook new dishes in order to gain new experience because I believe the culinary world is the one which unlimited and infinite. I would like to recommend the school that holds a series of classes for pupils who want to learn professional cookery skills for 6 or 8 months. Thank you for all the learnings , Best Regards, Pardis Ghobadi

pardisghobadiSun Nov 17 2024

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coherence cohesion

Try to organize your ideas more logically and improve transitions between them to achieve higher coherence.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea to improve cohesion.

task achievement

Include more specific details or examples to enhance the completeness of your response.

task achievement

The letter conveys appreciation and provides meaningful feedback on the course.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately included, maintaining a formal tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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