You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Writing a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter . Describe what you enjoyed about the course . Say how much cooking you have done since the course . Suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
letter finds you well ,I am writing this
letter regarding the request for feedback about the cookery course which I recently attended at your institution .
To begin
,with I have to say that was really amusing and I really enjoyed it and I have been living alone and I have to make food every day so It was entertaining for me,besides
,I learnt a lot of recipes from many different countries all over the worlds such
as Italian meals , Indian cuisines, Mexican food, and so on .
Secondly
,I have learnt how to apply different things which I have been taught ,furthermore
,when I have completed the course ,I have consistently prepared dishes every day,Also
, each week I cook new dishes in order to gain new experience because I believe the culinary world is the one which unlimited and infinite.
I would like to recommend the school that holds a series of classes for pupils who want to learn professional cookery skills for 6 or 8 months.
Thank you for all the learnings ,
Best Regards,
Pardis GhobadiSubmitted by pardisghobadi on
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The letter conveys appreciation and provides meaningful feedback on the course.
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