Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Technology has become an indispensable part of every person

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it is sometimes thought modern equipment has become our

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more efficient, others believe that these

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make some difficulties. In

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essay, I will discuss both merits and demerits of using modern devices. There are several reasons why labour-saving equipment is useful to decrease

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and foremost important thing is that time-saving. Nowadays both men and women are working and they do not have time for

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chores. when they need to do some additional domestic works after their job they feel their

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is very stressful.

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survey in the UK,

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can feel relaxed and

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when they have modern

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as dishwashers, robotic

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cleaners, washing machines and so on.

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, if they have these

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, they have extra time

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they can spend a good quality time with their family.

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, labour-saving

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important to decline

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. Another reason to consider that communication

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make

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very easy means

people

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can work in any corner of the world, the internet and computer make it possible.

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, during pandemics, employees are encouraged to work from home and it is a convenient way to jobs.

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, there are many applications available to communicate to those

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who live anywhere across the world

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as Facebook,

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app,

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Instagram

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, modern devices provide immense benefits.

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, every garden has weeds, there are some drawbacks

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, due to long sitting for jobs at home, human's

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is very sedentary.

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, without physical

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people

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face many diseases like diabetes.

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, they think about how to keep them fit and healthy,

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situation

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stress

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in their

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. In the conclusion, it is true that modern technology

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equipment

is very helpful in daily

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and reduce

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, but the negative effects should not neglect.

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