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When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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Educational issues related to the importance of
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skills
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 (listening, reading, speaking, writing) have been widely discussed among people over countries. Some people suppose that a part of
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 is more important than others. There are only 2-3
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 that are tested even in some high-level exams.
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 a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. I disagree with
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 point almost entirely. As far as practicality, efficiency, and economy are concerned, I strongly hold that all
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 are equally important.
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 of all, with the development of globalization, we would have more conversations or letters using a foreign
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. All
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skills
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 are essential to communication, so we should learn them equally.
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, the studying of one of the
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 is beneficial to the studying of the other.
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, practising speaking can increase our writing
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 either because these two
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 are used to express minds and the generating mind skill is trained during their studying process of them. We can learn a foreign
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 efficiently. Some people think that the time and economic consumption of learning
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skills
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 equally are tremendous, so we just need to learn some
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 which are tested in exams. I agree with
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 point partly. But in my opinion, the aim of learning a foreign
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 is not an exam. In another word, we can gain many benefits from a frequency foreign
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 skill.
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, I’m a student majoring in optical engineering and I need to read and publish articles in foreign
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 periodical journals.
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, attending conferences is
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 necessary. So, all
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skills
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 are essential for me. In conclusion, I suppose we should attach importance to
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skills
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 equally whatever our aim of learning a foreign
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 is.
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